that was yesterday

13 10 2014

daffodil bulbs
planted in neat rows
that was yesterday
he walk the rows
of spring

Started taking lessons in another form of Japanese poetry, the tanka.

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14 10 2014
words4jp

Very pretty;) I love it – the thought of planting bulbs now, so we can see the blossoms in the spring. Your tanka is awesome. I have always enjoyed tankas. I find when I cannot get what I want to say in a haiku, I can typically express on a tanka.

14 10 2014
polaris299

Thank you
First conscious effort, seems I can do tanka as well.

Glad you enjoyed it
Be well

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